Hummingbird

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Fresh off the presses... My Labor Day poem... Enjoy!

Hummingbird

"That thing will never fly, its
Aeronautically unsound.
There's no way in tarnation
You can get it off the ground!"

"It's wingspan is far too short,
It's body mass too high."
The engineers harrumphed and said
That "it would not EVER fly."

The birds took but just one look
And they were all chagrined,
"Its so small It will blow away
The first time there's a wind!"

"It's wings are short and stubby
It is lacking form and grace,
To bird kind that thing would be
Quite frankly, a disgrace."

But God just smiled impishly,
And when he said the word
Lo and behold, there it was,
A little humming bird.

It's maneuvers? Pure precision,
It could hover, it could fly,
It could back up! (unlike any
Other bird up in the sky).

The lesson we should learn here,
Is appearances mislead.
Its not our gifts, but effort,
That allows us to succeed.

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Hampton commented on Hummingbird

10-01-2010

A rhyming story with a moral in the true Latin sense. Nicely done..................................................Hampton

gmcookie

10/03/2010

Hampton, Thanks much for the compliments. I'm glad you like my work. I certainly enjoy writing it. This poem in particular was a fun write. I like to message... hehe

Stryx commented on Hummingbird

10-01-2010

Excellent little piece, and nicely put together. Like the bumblebee, it ain't supposed to happen - but it does. I like it. Nice job.

Olan01 commented on Hummingbird

09-26-2010

Love this nature focused poem of possiblities. In my home in the forest hummingbirds reside in the hundreds and the dielight of watching them, knowing them is a pure joy. I would set for hours admiring their engineering feat.

gmcookie

09/26/2010

Olan, The hummingbird is symbolic of many things. What got me thinking along this line was an old Nina Simone song. It was recorded before the civil rights movement and was at heart about accomplishing the impossible. Her recurrent line was "Hummingbirds DO fly...."

ginga commented on Hummingbird

09-20-2010

cookie, I absolutely adore this. Your craft of cadence and rhyme entwined with a quirky topic is the best! ginga

Teardrops commented on Hummingbird

09-14-2010

Glenn this is wonderful ican see God's joke when he made the bird but also his pride when the bird flew . We live in a place where looks and what we have over powers the spirit inside and the courage it takes to live this life . I am glad you wrote this its wonderful lesson in life thanks Marie

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