The Kid Down the Street

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The Kid Down the Street

When we meet a kid in need

It's up to us to choose

Whether we will stop to help,

Who will win and who will lose.

 

If someone hasn't got the time

To teach them right from wrong

The village needs to raise that child

And let them know that they belong.

 

Cause when we meet that kid some day

We'll choose to help or walk away.

They have a name for that, you see

It's called responsibility.

 

We raise our kids and teach them right,

When the gun shots pierce the night

It doesn't matter what we said

It's what we did that counts instead.

 

For, there's a price that we may pay,

That kid may kill our kids some day.

It's really up to us to choose.

Just who will win and who will lose?

 

In life's long arc we someday learn

Which bridge to build and which to burn.

Yet still, our task is incomplete

Without that kid just down the street.

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BlackButterfly1 commented on The Kid Down the Street

07-09-2010

Your poetry is awesome!! The subject content is touching but so true. You make me see the world from a different perspective and I love it!

rsalassi commented on The Kid Down the Street

06-23-2010

Where have you been? You are a natural!!! I look forward to reading much more of your work!

WordSlinger commented on The Kid Down the Street

06-21-2010

See what I mean the wisdom King, you have a great heart Glen, love it, ty WS

ginga commented on The Kid Down the Street

06-17-2010

cookie, Such great advice and truths to abide by. Sticks and stones can hurt and kill so beware and Teach your children well. ginga

Chaos128 commented on The Kid Down the Street

06-15-2010

Too many people think that accepting the concept: "We're all connected", would oblige them to engage in a perpetual group hug. Pretending you're unaware of an obligation doesn't mean the bill won't come due. Sharp, GM!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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