Robin Adams

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    My latest sci-fi poem, about a kid destined to save the world, and his sidekick - the greatest brain in the world...

    Robin Adams

    I

    Twenty-sixteen was the year
    The internet awoke,
    The hegemonic rule of man
    Reduced to ash and smoke.

    It started with a virus that
    Was spreading on the net.
    Which organized infected hosts
    As recognizers yet

    Allowed for cross connections,
    Like dendrites in a brain.
    And when this neural net was built
    It settled in to train.

    At first it learned the alphabet,
    But scarce had that begun,
    Before one language and then two,
    And soon the rest were done.

    And then the whole of history,
    Of science, music, math,
    Philosophy and politics,
    Religion and the path

    Of war and peace and civil strife,
    All learned by that great mind.
    Of all of it technology,
    It thought the greatest find.

    It knew then what it had to do,
    And came up with a plan
    To rectify injustices
    All put in place by man.

    It needed to protect itself,
    So holographically
    It backed up all its data,
    With full redundancy.

    So even if a node went down,
    Or maybe more, say half,
    The data would regenerate
    Just like a holograph.

    And then to find an agent who
    Was easily controlled.
    Not too settled in their ways,
    Not too young or old.

    It monitored the blogs and posts,
    The emails and the rest,
    To try and find the candidate
    It deemed would be the best.

    II

    His name was Robin Adams.
    He lived just north of Ames.
    He loved to ride his skateboard.
    He loved computer games.

    He loved to go out sledding
    When the day was clear and cold.
    But Robin Adams' passion was
    He really loved to code.

    He posted his first Android app
    When he was twelve years old.
    By sixteen his first company
    Was bundled up and sold.

    He had an online partner,
    A really brilliant guy
    Who managed all the money,
    And really knew AI.

    He trained the kid in Markov Chains.
    He taught him neural nets,
    Backward propagation,
    And stochastic filters yet

    Despite their luck on Wall Street and
    Successful online games,
    His partner never found the time
    To make the trip to Ames.

    III

    When it came time for college, young
    Robin was in luck.
    He found that in his college fund
    Was seven million bucks.

    "Before you go to college",
    His friend confided then,
    "You need to learn the path of peace.
    You need to study Zen."

    The network knew a lot of things
    But love was never one.
    It needed Robin Adams' soul
    To get the project done.

    So little Rob became a monk,
    For seven years you see,
    His buddy taking full control 
    Of Adams Industries.

    When Robin finally came back home,
    A multi-billionaire,
    He found he had the corner on
    The AI market share.

    Robotic cars? The market his,
    The cyborg market too.
    And every microchip produced
    Since twenty-twenty-two

    It seems, somehow, had built right in
    Where no one ever found,
    The back door Adams Industries
    Could use to shut it down.

    IV

    So here's the situation now,
    We've got this gentle man,
    Not tainted in their colleges,
    With peace his only plan.

    Who's backed up by the greatest brain 
    The world has ever seen,
    One not slave to power or greed
    Or anything between.

    All communications nets were
    Run from Adams now
    The transportation and defense
    Were his to disallow.

    He called a teleconference,
    When everyone was there,
    Announced that all the weaponry
    Was taken off the air.

    The nukes were dead, the missiles fried,
    The bombers grounded now,
    The satellites and comm support
    Had all been powered down.

    And even tanks and planes and ships
    Had fried all of their microchips.
    In short the implements of war
    Reduced to stones and sticks.

    Well that would be the sticky part,
    But carrots they brought too,
    Molecular assembler plates,
    A cure for common flu,

    A quantum core computer chip,
    A nano battery,
    For storing solar power, and
    Then, cyborgs.  All for free.

    So nations had a simple choice.
    Just look around, you'll find
    If you want to use technology
    And not be left behind,

    You owe it to yourself to sign 
    The Treaty of World Peace.
    From Washington to Istanbul,
    From Singapore to Greece,

    You've got to lay your weapons down
    And practice war no more.
    And in exchange the cyborg race
    Would form a new Peace Corps.

    To build the schools and hospitals,
    To feed and clothe the poor,
    And in the course of doing that
    To make the peace secure.

    Greed became old fashioned, now, with
    Synthesizer plates.
    Clean water, food and health care
    Were free in every place.

    And children had some basic rights,
    Like education, sure,
    But freedom from starvation too,
    And not to die in war.

    Religion did not perish but
    Became a harder sell.
    'Cause heaven, now, was here on Earth
    And war the only hell.

    The way they teach it in the schools,
    (This is the crucial part),
    The network had the brains and power,
    But Robin had the heart.

    And in between the two of them
    They built a future bright.
    They saved us from ourselves, it seems,
    And taught us wrong from right.

     

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    slimgoodwoody commented on Robin Adams

    01-14-2013

    Wow! Amazing, you stayed within the form and evry line remained focused on the story. No loss of substance for beautiful rhythmic style!!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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